David And Debra

     

                                   David And Debra

 

        It was a beautiful day, with Christmas decorations and lights adorning the surroundings, and the streets covered with snow, which the sun was slowly starting to melt. Debra woke up early and went out to have breakfast. After having dinner at a cafe near Central Park, she had made plans to meet a friend she had not seen for a long time. Debra wanted to meet her friend as soon as possible. While she was waiting for his friend after coming to the cafe and having her meal, she heard the conversation of two tourists sitting at the next table and realized that they did not know how to get to their destination. Thinking that she could help them, she went to them and said that she could take them to their destination. Debra got up from the cafe with the two tourists and took them to their destination where they were to meet her friend.  


      Meanwhile, David woke up to the phone ringing and his secretary told him that he was late for the meeting and that's why the company they were going to make a deal with didn't want to work with them anymore. David was both very sad and angry at himself for missing a very important opportunity. Since staying at home affected him even worse, he thought it would be good to get some fresh air and go for a walk with his dog. The friend she was going to meet called Debra and told her that her child was sick and that she couldn't come to the meeting. Although Debra was upset, it was good for her to go outside and since it was near the park, she decided to take a walk. David was sitting on a park a bench and thinking worriedly, but his dog wanted to play with him. At that moment, Debra, who was passing by, noticed that David was sad and his dog wanted to play with him, so she approached the dog and started playing with it. David was so distracted that he didn't realize anything. After playing and taking care of the dog for a while, Debra went to David, sat down and introduced herself. With a surprised expression on his face, David introduced himself and thanked her for playing with his dog. Debra told David he didn't look well and that she could talk to him if he wanted. David was very surprised, but at the same time he thought it would be good to talk to someone and tell her what happened to him. They sat and talked for a long time. Debra gave David a lot of support to make him feel good.  


     After their conversation, Debra gave David her number and told him he could help and call if he needed someone to talk to.  They had formed a beautiful friendship, albeit spontaneously and unexpectedly.

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  1. Elif Köseoğulları14 Mayıs 2024 04:37

    You managed to ensure the flow of meaning. I did not see any problems with the grammar either. In terms of structure, the introduction, development and conclusion sections have been completed. It is very clear, understandable and creative.

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